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[evoWALO]

Some additions. Pls critic and I'm thinking of putting a person leaning on the doughnuts holding a sign saying "Now Bigger"

http://img157.imageshack.**/img157/9168/fallingdonuts1ma9.th.jpg

http://hoopsdonuts.com/

 

[evoWALO]

On to another project: a banner measuring 1 meter tall by 9 meters wide. Will be placed on the roof of the building where the main store is located.

http://img219.imageshack.**/img219/4981/casasusanabannerrk0.th.jpg

Goal:

1. Get people who are parked in the parking lot to take notice and visit the store.
2. Be visible 10-50 meters away
3. Make people realize that there is a donut store at that exact spot
4. Raise pedestrian traffic

 

[mancs]

Last two are quite good, just improve the quality of the text in the second one.