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Hey thats not bad at all! Maybe there is to much empty space in the middle :)
 
yeah possibly move the 120 for a dozen thing down a tad
 
To everyone: thanks for the feedback and here is the update. still no box of 12 pcs donuts cause all of em got sold out. Will try again to get a shot of the 12 donuts tomorrow. I was a bit wrestles so I did another config with the feedback I got. If I didnt incorporate your suggestions I may do so in a later time when I got the box of donuts. Some suggestions dont work w/o the box of donuts. :)

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I think its gonna be quite good, with the donuts ;) :thumbsup:
 
sorry cant critic it, but I do want to say it looks great. nice job :thumbsup:
 
mmmmmm....donuts :p .....I'm hungry all the sudden.

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Yeah, but the poster looks great! You may try arranging the bottom a bit differently though.
 
Nice work dude! :thumbsup:
 
Love it! i'm sure you'll have plenty of customers, they look really nice :drool:
 
Nice, but maybe you should have cutted the donuts out more accurate :thumbsup:
 
Thanks for the advice any other suggestions? I'm having problems emphasizing that this poster is selling larger-sized doughnuts. I was thinking emphasizing the smallness of the box as compared to the doughnut.
 
^ I think its cool dude ;) Only what i mentioned.
 
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