It's awful to load because you didn't resize it.
You've got photoshop, go to Image -> Image Size, and make the longest side something between 1024-800px..
It's out of focus, by the way. Could do with dragging down the red (ctrl+u, scroll to "red" and reduce the saturation a wee bit).
Other than that, the model works well, but why isn't she looking at us?
Other than that, you're on the right track. Remember it's all about having
fun. Never let anyone take the fun out of photography for you..
